You can think of writing like applying makeup. Putting on just enough enhances one’s appearance, but too much can make you look like a waxy mold of a stringy, over-cooked ham. (See what I mean?) Good writers know that a manuscript isn’t finished until there is just the right balance of show and tell. But how do you decide?
When revising your work, first read each paragraph and look for telling places where:
- You explain how a character feels,
- You use an abstract description,
- You tell about a conversation.
Then decide if these narrative passages need to be spiced up with some showing:
- Is your character’s feeling a strong one? If so, then describe it by showing how the character looks and acts.
- Is an abstract description enough? If not, then add some juicy images and raw details.
- Is it sufficient to tell about a conversation? If a conversation is important, add dialogue to further develop your characters and move the story along.
- Excessive drama. Remember the makeup analogy? Use just enough drama to enhance. Too much will pull readers away from the story.
- Excessive dialogue. When characters talk, their conversations should be realistic. Too much dialogue can mean that characters are telling too much of the story.
- Excessive description. Have you showed more than you have to? Sometimes, writers use too many words to describe. Look for wordy descriptions, and replace them with fewer and well-chosen words.
Writing is an art form. Clichés like show don’t tell have their place, but they don’t command the writing and revising process. Great writers know when dramatization is needed and in what measure. Do you?